It's your first time. You did a great job.
It's well-balanced and the line is very stable!
My face is a bit long so I'll adjust the position a little bit.
Please lower your eyebrows and eyes a little bit because your eyes are positioned upward. The yellow horizontal line above the eyebrow was the place where the upper line of the eyebrow was located.
The length, shape, and thickness of the eyebrows are all perfect.
The shape of the eyes is good, but the pupils are a little big, so please shorten them. Especially with our eyes, the right eye is bigger than the left eye. Make it round, please.
The length of the philtrum is long, so please lower your nose more. It's very nice in shape and size. Just take the nostrils apart. If you have nostrils between your nostrils, your nostrils can get bigger when you color them.
Her lips are very good. Face shape is good, too!
Take off the top of your head so it won't be too sharp, and I think it'll be good if your neck gets a little shorter:-)