You've gotten a lot better in the meantime. Overall, the legibility of each letter is much better because of the living form of each letter. :) Since 7mm wired notes have limitations on the upper and lower parts, it's a bit narrow to emphasize large-sized characters, but if you reduce the overall size of the letters a little bit, you'll feel less stuffy. When you start, you can start with the first letter 'I' and reduce the size a little bit. One more thing to give you, from the beginning to the middle, the axis of the writing is standing upright, and as the second half of the writing continues, the axis of the writing is slightly wobbling and lying on the left side, and if the axis of the writing is generally constant, it will be much more neat and correct. Since long writing requires endurance, it takes constant practice and time to adjust the font, size, axis, and middle line from beginning to end. Don't transcribe too much from the beginning, but take your time and increase your breathing.If you look at it, you'll naturally get a much more organized handwriting! Thank you so much for following me in a short notice!