가지꽃
9/11/2020
Compared to your storyboard, I can feel that the composition is monotonous at a glance. The tone of the writing itself is not dynamic and it's a calm tone... When making a thumbnail book, let's think about a more diverse layout, size, etc. ^^
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TOTOMAY
크리에이터
9/16/2020
^-----^,,,,,❤
classmate
9/20/2020
The storyboard is incomplete because the story is not complete.How many storyboards should a fairy tale book be? I drew a picture at the center of the main scene of the story, but as I did it, I didn't know to what extent I had to organize it and which part to omit.
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TOTOMAY
크리에이터
9/20/2020
Ms.Huya~~Oh my~💓::::::: Clean up the manuscript. You have to proceed with the storyboard. Otherwise. It's not about progress. I couldn't organize myself. I'm not sure about the image of perfection. The setting of the production keeps getting messed up.^--^;;;; You're going to rearrange the pages. Create a storyboard. The more you do, the more you upgrade the storyboard. (I worked on it for a few months at first, ack~🤣,;;;) And draw it more clearly. Then, it's clearly imprinted in your head! 👍🏻👍🏻⭐🔥
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Classmate775369h
9/11/2020
1. There lived a rabbit family in the deep forest. The mother rabbit thought the rabbit needed a younger brother now. "Tori, how about you have a younger brother? I think the tiger in the front door has become braver with a younger brother," said Mom. "Mom, I don't need a brother at all. I can ride a bike on the playground and sleep in the moonlit forest. Younger brother doesn't need more than apple or lemon."Tory said. The mother rabbit looked embarrassed. 2. There were penguins and shrimp living in the wide sea. The shrimp had a small body and bent waist, but he drew well. Penguins were big and well-rounded, but I envied them. One day, the shrimp drew a nice pterosaur. Penguin was surprised to see a pterosaur. "Shrimp. Where does this animal live? I've never seen it before," said the penguin. "I've never seen it either. It's just a picture from a box inside a treasure island," said the shrimp.
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TOTOMAY
크리에이터
9/13/2020
The ending was. But you succeeded. I laughed so hard.~~(๑•̀ᴗ-)❤
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가지꽃
9/15/2020
Thank you, Mr. Spring, for your support in my last article!Spring, fighting!
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아뉴
9/11/2020
I think it got too long after using it!^^; A meeting was held in the forest playground and tigers, rabbits, penguins, and pterosaurs all gathered. This is because both the sun and the moon have disappeared for some time. Pterosaurs said they saw the hungry sea swallow up both the sun and the moon a few days ago. Then the rabbit made a plot to throw apples resembling the red sun during the day and lemons resembling the yellow moon into the sea at night. The sea, which was full when the apple was thrown, spat out the sun again the next morning, and the moon again that night when the lemon was thrown. The penguin living on the beach said he would take the job, and the rest of the animals gathered apples and lemons in the box. Sometimes the sun and moon disappeared on the day the penguin forgot or went on vacation, but bright light came back in the forest.
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