You've always had a great sense of belonging...!
You used to have a good flow, but I think your age has changed more stably since you took the class.
In my case, when I look at the photo data and croquis, if the tie is too big and there is a risk of being cut, I express the beginning and end in advance and briefly position it.
You did a great job. Can you do the croquis in a short time? About 30 seconds to 1 minute!
There are a lot of cases where there are two details on one line.
(I'm not saying it's bad, but this class is focused on simplifying the tie as much as possible with the lines of zigzags!)
Think about the flow of zigzags and try croquis focusing on C, S, and straight lines!
Thank you for your efforts.~!