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The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ


๐Ÿ‘Š ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ด์œ ๋Š”โ€ฆ

์˜์–ด๋กœ โ€œ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ด์œ ๋Š”โ€ฆโ€์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ข‹์„๊นŒ์š”?

์ด๋ฒˆ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์—๋Š” ์•„์ฃผ ์ข‹์€ ์ฒญํฌ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋กœ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด๋ณด๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.



๐Ÿ‘Š The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ

The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ

๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ด์œ ๋Š”โ€ฆ

์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€๋งŒ ๋จผ์ € ์ž…์— ๋ถ™์—ฌ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค ํ•„์š” ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ‘Š

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋’ค์— ๋‚ด ์ง„์งœ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ๋ถ™์ด๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.



๐Ÿ‘Š STEP 1. ์ด์œ  ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋ถ™์ด๊ธฐ

The reason I want to go to Hawaii is that I love the ocean.

๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ด์œ ๋Š”

๋ฐ”๋‹ค๋ฅผ ์ •๋ง ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ๋๋‚ด์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.

์Šค์Šค๋กœ์—๊ฒŒ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

WHY? ๐Ÿ‘Š

์™œ ๋ฐ”๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์€๋ฐ?



๐Ÿ‘Š STEP 2. ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ๋ถ™์ด๊ธฐ

I love looking at the blue ocean because it makes me feel relaxed.

์ €๋Š” ํ‘ธ๋ฅธ ๋ฐ”๋‹ค๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ์ข‹์•„ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์™œ๋ƒํ•˜๋ฉด ๋งˆ์Œ์ด ํŽธ์•ˆํ•ด์ง€๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด์ œ ์กฐ๊ธˆ์”ฉ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์ฃ ?

์ด๋ฒˆ์—๋Š” ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ๋ถ™์—ฌ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.



๐Ÿ‘Š STEP 3. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๊ฒƒ ๋ถ™์ด๊ธฐ

I want to walk along the beach, watch the sunset, and just enjoy the moment.

ํ•ด๋ณ€์„ ๊ฑท๊ณ ,

๋…ธ์„์„ ๋ฐ”๋ผ๋ณด๊ณ ,

๊ทธ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„์„ ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ์ฆ๊ธฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š” ์ฒญํฌ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ

๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜์”ฉ ๋ถ™์˜€๋”๋‹ˆ

์–ด๋А์ƒˆ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


๐Ÿ‘Š ์ด์ œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์— ๋งํ•ด๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”?

The reason I want to go to Hawaii is that I love the ocean. I love looking at the blue ocean because it makes me feel relaxed. I want to walk along the beach, watch the sunset, and just enjoy the moment. I hope I can go there someday.

์–ด๋ ต์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ์ด ๋ชจ๋“  ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ•œ ๋ฉ์–ด๋ฆฌ ๋งํ•˜๊ณ  โ†’ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  โ†’ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ๋ถ™์ธ ๊ฒƒ๋ฟ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๊ฒƒ์ด ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์ฒญํฌ ๋Ÿฌ๋‹์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ‘Š


๐ŸŒด ์ด๋ฒˆ์—๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„ ์ฐจ๋ก€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

๋จผ์ € ์ด๊ฒƒ๋งŒ ๋งํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

The reason I want to go to Hawaii isโ€ฆ

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋งŒ์˜ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ถ™์—ฌ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

because I love the ocean.

because I want to relax.

because I love tropical places.

because I've always wanted to visit Hawaii.


์ •๋‹ต์€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์—ฌํ–‰๋„ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์˜์–ด๋„ ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋‚จ์˜ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์™ธ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ

๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ง ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ๋ง์„ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ.


๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์–ธ์  ๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ง ํ•˜์™€์ด์— ๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ ๋œ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•ด๋ณด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

โ€œALOHA, CSC members!

This is HAWAII! ๐ŸŒด๐ŸŒŠ๐Ÿ‘Šโ€

๊ทธ๋‚ ๊นŒ์ง€,

ONE CHUNK AT A TIME. ๐Ÿ‘Š

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