Hello! I'm T-Yeo:)
As soon as I saw it, I was amazed! You're such a great combination of colors! The gradation is natural, and thanks to the circle in the background, it looks like a cocktail. You're too good to be the first color!
The feedback I'll give you is as follows.
1. Missed light and shade - You left out light and shade on your bag strap and cardigan! The other parts are light and dark, so I think it's more flatter. Just like you expressed light and shade on your clothes, hair, and face, if you put it in the rest, it will be a harmonious picture overall :)
2. Choose the light and shade color. - The light and shade color you put in the head part is a bit lighter! I think it would be good to paint the inner part with a more bold color. (A green color that increases chroma and brightness) I think there will be a pen type effect. If you put light and shade with a pen with a clear boundary, you can get a hard color! So let me tell you what it's like to put light and shade in a pen with a light pen! (ex. airbrush)
The lecture on pens will also be covered in this chapter, so if it's hard to find it, you can set it up together then! You said it was your first time painting, but you did an incredibly good job, so I'm looking forward to your performance in this lecture.+_+ See you then! Thank you for everything.🤗